Pg 4 - 1.0 mentions stage 1 & 2 not 3 - shows 3 on flow chart
Pg5 -1.1 - any copyright issues?
R4 I would like to see a comment on weekly or regular scanning of the system - no scan until downtime
Good to ref other docs but put some real recommendations into this doc to add value
P6 - last para "Once this inventory - determine ??? if or when all?
P7 - 3.0 flowchart - should address reaction of vendor to MS patch
P8 - end of 3.0 - need to talk about subscriptions to sites so changes are sent to you.
Every 2 weeks - effort to schedule work? I guess I agree rathen than say when patches come in.
P8 3.2 - How check digital signatures? Use more as example - MS and Symantec
P8 3.3 - Needs to talk about checking with the process control vendor if the update may affect it's operation
P9 4.0 Flowchart - no in house testing?
P10 4.1 - Generation? use of abbreviations not defined (CCA), Bulk Electrical System
P10 4.1 Other Non critical - need a - can - They can be rebooted...
P10 4.2 Security Patches - remedied as quickly as posible - missing ly in quickly
P11 4.3 needs more visability - I think this section is very important
P12 4.4.2 - should we use MS terms for levels? I do not like emergency
P12 4.4.2 next to last line IIf should be If